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Fiore
 Drew's True Shelter

Age: 42 Joined: 12 Feb 2007 Posts: 1703 Location: Kapellen, Belgium
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The second one has got to be my favourite Jackie - I'm not very much into purple, so I guess that's the main reason for not liking the first one thát much.
The second one however, now thát I like ! First of all you've used a pic that counts amongst my all-time favourites, so it's always a joy to see it appear in artwork. Furthermore I much prefer the layout of 'eyes' in this version, when I compare the two. I've got to agree with mames here, about 'eyes' being a tad awkward to read in the first version.
Also have got to agree with Ermina, when she talks about the inside curve of the second 'e'.
And finally, what I like most of all about this second wp, is the contrast between his full-on coloured eyes, and the lighter opacity of the rest of the wp. It's very striking and eye-catching (no pun intended).

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Posted: 10.04.2008, 20:48
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Sparkles
 Southern O-lips Fancier

Age: 42 Joined: 13 Feb 2007 Posts: 1402 Location: Georgia, USA
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Jackie
Passionate Prince

Joined: 25 Apr 2007 Posts: 112
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It's interesting that almost all of you all the lighter one better. I actually prefer the first, even though I couldn't get it to work right for me, because I think it is more dramatic and interesting. I was more worried about the second being all bland and wishy-washy, which I do think it is. Like I said, I will revisit them at a later date. Perhaps I should post the psd file for the first and throw it open as a challenge!
Thanks again for all the comments and suggestions.
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Posted: 10.04.2008, 23:00
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Jennifer
 Passionate Prince

Age: 23 Joined: 28 Apr 2008 Posts: 145 Location: Andalusia, Alabama
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Jackie, I love the second wall. I can feel his eyes piercing through me. 
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Posted: 28.04.2008, 20:27
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Carmen
 Mediaeval Babe

Age: 44 Joined: 11 Feb 2007 Posts: 1536 Location: Germany
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